英語第十六天 2010-10-7
推薦一個英語學習網站給大家http://cn.livemocha.com ，這網站上號稱有六百萬來自不同的國度的同學在一起學習。經過我的嘗試發現，在上面大家可以相互交流學習，相互當老師批閱其他同學提交的作業。下面就舉兩個實例，說明下在這個網站上面學習好玩的事情。
我今天在網站上進行了英語學習後，課程要求寫一段話。
題目之一，
描述物品：描述桌面上的一組物體。描述盒子裏的一組物體。例如：一束鮮花放在桌子上，糖果放在盒子裏。
以下是我提交的內容，
The woman is on the bus.
The boy is not in bed,he is on the couch.
The flowers are on the table.
I am in the chair.
The computer is on my table.
The candy is in the box.
The food is on the table.
I am not at the door,I am at the car.
I am not on the bus,I am in my chair.
The buildings are on the ground.
以下是一個英語爲母語的朋友的批閱及回覆，
The woman is on the bus.
The boy is not in bed, he is on the couch.
I am in the chair.
I am not at the door, I am at the car.
I am not on the bus, I am in my chair.
The buildings are on the ground.
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
The flowers are on the table. The computer is on my table.
The candy is in the box.
The food is on the table.
I have a new pair of shoes in a box, under my bed.
There is crockery and cutlery, set out on the table.
I kep some coins in box for change, when I need it.
I received a gift of some flowers and they arrived in a box.
Kyle, here are some extra sentences that may be of some interest.
題目之二，
人們在做什麼？
用肯定特徵和否定特徵分別描述六個人在做什麼：一個女人、一個男人、一個女孩、一個男孩、你和我。例如：我正坐在餐桌旁吃飯。我不是在牀上睡覺。
以下是我提交的內容
The man is runing with a red flower in his left hand, when he come across a boy. The boy is laughing at a dog,for that dog look like a pig.That man keep running,he went into a house.There is a woman on the couch,it is his mother.She is surprising,for the flowers is changing into food.I am eating in the chair.
I am not joking,I am doing exercise.
以下是一個英語爲母語的朋友的批閱及回覆，
Very good, except that instead of "come," "keep," et cetera, it should be "comes," "keeps," et cetera. "Come"is the conjugation of a plural subject for present tense verbs; "comes" is for singular subjects. Also, "runing" should be "running." In the third sentence, there should be a space between the comma and the word "he." In this same sentence, change "went" to "goes:" you cannot change tenses from present to past like this. In the fourth sentence, change the comma to a semicolon and add a space between the punctation and the word "it." In the following sentence, "surprising" means "surprises one;" this word should be changed to "surprised." Add a space between the comma and "for." Additionally, "the flowers are changing" is the correct way to phrase this. Insert a space between the last comma and "I," or change the sentence to, "I am not joking but doing exercise."
以上就是兩個實際例子，相信大家也差不多瞭解這種方式了。在這上面除了別人幫我們糾正英文之外，我們也可以幫別人糾正中文。這裏就不舉例說明了。總之在這上面，我們可以和世界各地的人類交流學習，相互糾正語言，共同進步。個人覺得，這是個很好玩的學習地方。
推薦就到此結束，感不感興趣就是個人的事了。