2015A 32150 閱讀筆記

1框架分析


1.1摘要


1.1.1第一段

       The breakout of Ebola in 2014 triggered global panic. How to control and eradicate Ebola has become a universal concern ever since. 

直接指明大背景:2014年埃博拉席捲全球。然後引出題目要他們做的事:解決掉埃博拉病毒。

1.1.2第二段

       Firstly, we build up an epidemic model SEIHCR (CT)which takes the special features of Ebola into consideration. These are treatment from hospital,infectious corpses and intensified contact tracing. This model is developed from the traditional SEIR model. The model’s results (Fig.4,5,6), whose parameters are decided using computer simulation, match perfectly with the data reported by WHO, suggesting the validity of our improved model.
結構:
1.我們建立了一個考慮了(...)的模型
we build up an epidemic model SEIHCR (CT) which takes the special features of Ebola into consideration. 

2.寫了上述考慮到的東西具體有什麼(本文上述考慮到的東西是埃博拉的特徵)
These are treatment from hospitalinfectious corpses and intensified contact tracing.
3.寫了我建立的這個模型是以什麼模型爲基礎的。
This model is developed from the traditional SEIR model. 

4.模型的結果見(...)括號內可以是圖、表
The model's results (Fig.4,5,6),

5. 其參數通過計算機仿真確定,與(......)完全吻合,說明了改進模型的有效性
whose parameters are decided  using computer simulation, match perfectly with the data reported by WHO, suggesting the validity of our improved model.

1.1.3第三段

     Secondly, pharmaceutical intervention is studied thoroughly. The total quantity of the medicine needed is based on the cumulative number of individuals CUM (Fig.7). Results calculated from the WHO statistics and from the SEIHCR (CT) model show only minor discrepancy, further indicating the feasibility of our model. In designing the delivery system, we apply the weighted Fuzzy c- Means Clustering Algorithm and select 6 locations (Fig.10, Table.2) that should serve as the delivery centers for other cities. We optimize the delivery locations by each city’s location and needed medicineThe percentage each location shares is also figured out to facilitate future allocation (Table.3,4). The average speed of manufacturing should be no less than 106.2 unit dose per day and an increase in the manufacturing speed and the efficacy of medicine will reinforce the intervention effect.
結構:
1.開頭就提“其次”,是對第一段firstly的呼應。然後寫出下一步我們做了什麼工作。
Secondly, pharmaceutical intervention is studied thoroughly.
2.


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